I want to be able to tell my friends why is better than the birdsite, so I wrote a thing: "Mastodon Is Better than Twitter: Elevator Pitch"

I want this to be as persuasive as possible to outsiders, so I'd appreciate as much feedback as possible from Mastodon users

@codesections maybe add a bit of padding or resize your top bar, it looks kind of funky.

also black logo and white text is also bugging me.


@codesections But other than some CSS, the acual blog post is great! Loved the explaination about boosts and retweets and the "Mastodon Isn't a Business" and how its ad-free.

Only nitpicking i can even do is that the first few sentences are a bit boring to read trough for someone who already knows what twitter is. So it would probbably be better to introduce with that mastodon is accualy challenging twitter, and how could that even be possible? Because i think that would get the attention...

@codesections of twitter users.

Great overall, will defenetly send this to my twitter friends to have a read trough :P

@jex I also tweaked the intro a bit. I didn't add in the hook you suggested (though I like it), but I did cut it down a bit—maybe that helps with it being boring

@codesections padding on the navbar, because the text is touching the bottom of the navbar (j and g)

Great stuff man

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