Here is the prologue for the manuscript I'm working on.
The title of the potential novel is:
Data Slave
You can read that prologue here: https://writing.bnolet.me/posts/2021/05/data-slave-prologue/
Any feedback is GREATLY appreciated. You can also send to linuxliaison@fastmail.com
Interesting. Good premise for a book.
@brandon Hey there. I read your prologue. It's definitely promising. My advice, as someone who writes in the same genre, is to go for subtlety. People don't see themselves as evil, and that goes for big tech employees as well.
Big tech is really good at making people believe that privacy violations are a good thing. People don't need to be coerced to accept Big Brother. They actually pay to invite Big Brother in their homes. Use that.